Deadline #5 HW# 3

I revised two classmate's research proposals, Justin and Stephann. Both drafts, like mine were written in the first person which apparently is definitely a mistake. My draft was reviewed by Paulette and Stephann and they both concluded I didn't use the spellchecker/grammar option by Microsoft Word. There is an explanation for this though, as I don't have word and I didn't take the time to type my proposal in the library, rather on my computer at home that only has a notepad. Besides my grammar/spelling issues it is apparent to me that I need to specify certain conditions/terminology pertaining to baseball as not everyone is as learned about the sport as I am. I realize I needed to spend more time correcting my own proposal as most of my mistakes were obvious. As far as turnitin.com and my originality review, which was covered in class, I learned that turnitin.com only highlighted terms that I used, such as HGH (human growth hormone.) This does not need to be revised as it is the name of a supplement that is pertinent to my research paper.